This poem for my AP Lang Class is about running on the trail and every thing I see on the trail.
A beautiful morning perfect for running
And I am already 1 mile down
Dew fills the grass and a golden sun barely peeks through the clouds
I hear the birds chirp and water flowing in the creek
I am reminded of why I love to run and I never want to stop
Then out of nowhere like a Pearl Harbor attack
A drug deal, a beaver, a hobo on a bench
4 miles down and I am still staying strong
The air slowly warming
The wind just now starting to pick up
My breathing getting heavier
The miles seem longer and my mind starts to wonder
I squint my eyes and I can just barely make out
More drug deals, more beavers, more hobos on a bench
It's only been 10 miles
But it feels like 20
Sun strips my energy
Creek taunts me with its water
I try to distract myself
But I can no longer count
All the drug deals, all the beavers, all the hobos on a bench
Imagery- I use a lot of imagery in lines 3 and 4 to create
an image of how relaxing and peaceful it is while I am running. My imagery gets
a little less descriptive in each paragraph to make the reader realize how I am
getting more tired and paying less attention to my surroundings.
Allusion- In the line “Then out of nowhere like a Pearl
Harbor attack” I use an allusion to show how surprised I was to see the drug
deal, beaver, and hobo for the first time on the run.
Personification- “Creek taunts me with its water” is a
personification, creeks can’t really taunt someone, but it proves how tired and
desperate I am getting as I run on.
Repetition- I repeat the last line in each stanza, slightly
changing it each time to show that it is still the same run, but as the run
goes on my mind set is changing.
The lines in the first stanza are longer and the diction is detailed
making the beginning of my run sound relaxing. The lines start to get shorter
in the next stanzas showing that my patience is decreasing and I am getting
tired of running.